LA VIE MAGNIFIQUE
"I cannot rest from travel: I will drink
Life to the lees:"
Ulysses....Lord Tennyson
She travelled with the wind and lay
Once upon a time in May
The sun kissed sand where they sang and say
Her love awaiting at the bay
They sang her song
They danced along
The flowers blossomed and birds tweet
Banquet of gourmets food and sweet
They drank and dined
The food n wine
With merry hearts of love
Till stars twinkled above
They lay on the warmth of sand
A far crooning of a weary band
The night with her mystic sky
Endless spirits of affections high
Her dazzling smile his gleaming eyes
The gorgeous splendour of love and surprise
The comfort of his arms around
The sumptuous softness of the ground
Her whispers of love
Of turtle dove
His endless smile
Charming and gentile
He knew he had this night with her
For leaving the shore to travel afar
The ships wud sail at twilight dawn
And he would be gone to quest along
For months before he saw that smile
The gorgeous eyes like depths of Nile
His aching heart would quench and chime
As they lay embarced another time
WOW.. ITS AWESOME.. KEEP GOING ON. I LOVE TO SEE MORE FROM YOU
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written.
ReplyDeleteAwesome lines, true relationship and emotional one, great Debie
ReplyDeleteAs the title suggests, this is indeed magnifique!
ReplyDeleteThere is only one happiness in this life, to love and be loved. One can find his/her love in many things. And u found in Ur writings, that makes others to be loved
ReplyDeleteMy words are less to describe on these beautiful lines . Really epic
ReplyDeleteHer dazzling smile his gleaming eyes
ReplyDeleteThe gorgeous splendour of love and surprise.....
For months before he saw that smile
The gorgeous eyes like depths of Nile .........simply wow ...!!!! .😘..the way you’ve expressed is absolutely mind blowing ...keep rocking ..!!
Gorgeously composed! As always you leave me haunted by your last verse....... True hallmark of great poetry, where it echoes in the mind even long after I've finished reading it, 👍 you never fail to astound me Debi, never!!!
ReplyDeleteWow.....thank u sooo much for ur adulations!!!! One inam in absolute loss of words for such appreciation.,❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
ReplyDeleteVery good.... hope to see more works like this in future...
ReplyDeleteEasily transports the reader to a romantic disposition.
ReplyDeleteI am in a state ,
ReplyDeleteI can make a bet,
Love is in the sky,
it's delapedated,
But in a genuine ,that's my fate...
I cry across the rain,
There is a pen,but no pain,
I smile,woke up,
I cherish what I gain
That's was very touching indeed. Thank u so much for ur appreciations!
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely amazing and beautiful..
ReplyDeleteEverything flowed very well and the imagery was a joy to read..
Keep going Debi ji!!!
Thank u for ur acknowledgements. I am touched.❤️❤️❤️
ReplyDeleteWell written 👌🏻
ReplyDeleteThank u so much!
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ReplyDeleteMademoiselle, cette mer, murmurant l'infime quantite de sentiment, pour elle, avait la meme splendeur.
ReplyDelete- A bee, you once knew.