Friday 5 April 2019

Song Of The Past

The train left the station
The whistles blew off guard
Unmindful in my journey
I hummed a song of past

The song of love and joy
Of closeness and memories amassed
Unmindful in my journey
I hummed a song of past

The fields ran green and rooks ran blue
Yellow dandelions showered a contrast 
Unmindful in my journey
I hummed a song of past

The song rose high on one of souls
The warm embrace that did outlast
Unmindful in my journey
I hummed a song of past

The beauty of lips that kissed with zeal
The sailor's heart dismast
Unmindful in my journey
I hummed a song of past

The rain quenched the country hill
As the train looped the hillocks cast
Unmindful in my journey
I hummed a song of past

The end of journey at a hill...cottages that run afar
The closing twilight that spoke avast
Unmindful through my journey
I hummed the song of past







21 comments:

  1. Wowwwww took me back into my song of the past.... So touching... absolute beauty

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  2. Thank u so much for ever encouraging me. Each and every appreciation means a lot. Heartfelt thanks.

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  3. Wowwww this is too good I never knew you write so well keep it up

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  4. Glad to hear from you....appreciation is always great from.family.....thank u

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  5. Awosome....impressive...touching and true feelings I guess No one can express better....compliments to u...keep up the good work....

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  6. To be very frank m not at much good in English .. but wanna appreciate ur talent .. its like awesome ..

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  7. That the simplicity of words can evoke such beautifully interwoven emotional and scenic imagery is what I felt on reading this piece, really looking forward to reading more from you.

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  8. Thank u....I merely scribble.....n I am.songladnthat it is recieving all.the accolades .

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  9. Thank u so much for your appreciations!

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  10. Thank u so much Riya😘😘

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  11. Beautiful.. Lovely.. Nostalgia

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  12. Thank u for your encouragement ❤️

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  13. Good talent you have keep write again

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  14. This is so amazing 😍❤️

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