I am not this hair
I am not this skin
I am this soul.....
that lives within......
- Rumi
Existence is pure Bliss.....
And to find it deep within
A gurgling child.....your mother's hand...
A white flower....the sea shore sand
A long warm hug.....a forgotten song
An old photograph hung all along
A toothless smile.....a quiet afternoon
A sudden rain.....a romantic moon
A lover's touch....a tinge of pain
A friend you lost.... and found him again
A long long ride....a scenic trip
A sailors wind that moves his ship
The walk on grass....the wet cold dews
A box full of littering mews
A passionate kiss....a whisper in your ear
An sensuous touch of the skin so near
A tickle on skin....a glinting eye
The warmth of breath that takes you high
All that is worldly yet it is not
The universe and her powerful plot
To mesmerise the soul in you
Your identity....that you so knew......
Simply marvelous.....
ReplyDeleteSimply marvelous.....
ReplyDeleteThank u....scribbling after a gap
ReplyDeleteThese words took me to the world you weaved ♥️♥️
ReplyDeleteThank u so much....that's encouraging
ReplyDeleteYou are an inspiration ♥️
Deletedont know about poetry much but these lines took me somewhere in my past .. while reading just taking feel of each and every word.
ReplyDeleteWow...thanks for the appreciation...
ReplyDeleteFabulous...am still engrossed in the hidden meaning behind these beautiful words of wisdom.... Live life.... awesome....
ReplyDeletethe day i read, it really appeal me how well you express things.. Each word have magical effect...
ReplyDeleteWow. Its nice how u symbolise all the feeling inside the person into that beautiful images.
ReplyDeleteI think in each line u draw a painting in the reader's mind.
Thank u So much for all your appreciations.....glad
ReplyDeleteFantabulous... Don't have words to explain how much I liked it... Keep the good work going... 👌👌👌
ReplyDeleteMarvelous... Fabulous yaar..Good one!
ReplyDeleteThank u so much for such endearing response....
ReplyDeleteBeautiful way to express
ReplyDeleteThank u.
ReplyDelete"the universe and her powerful plot to mesmerise the soul in you," what an apt conclusion to a very thought provoking piece....
ReplyDelete"the universe and her powerful plot to mesmerise the soul in you," what an apt conclusion to a very thought provoking piece....
ReplyDeleteThank u so much.....glad u appreciated the uniqueness of the universe itself
ReplyDeleteYou have a way with the words that is unique. Looking forward to more of the heartwritten works :-)
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful lines
ReplyDeleteThank u so much for your encouragement and support ❤️
ReplyDeleteBeautiful 👌🏻
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