The train left the station
The whistles blew off guard
Unmindful in my journey
I hummed a song of past
The song of love and joy
Of closeness and memories amassed
Unmindful in my journey
I hummed a song of past
The fields ran green and rooks ran blue
Yellow dandelions showered a contrast
The whistles blew off guard
Unmindful in my journey
I hummed a song of past
The song of love and joy
Of closeness and memories amassed
Unmindful in my journey
I hummed a song of past
The fields ran green and rooks ran blue
Yellow dandelions showered a contrast
Unmindful in my journey
I hummed a song of past
The song rose high on one of souls
The warm embrace that did outlast
I hummed a song of past
The song rose high on one of souls
The warm embrace that did outlast
Unmindful in my journey
I hummed a song of past
The beauty of lips that kissed with zeal
The sailor's heart dismast
Unmindful in my journey
I hummed a song of past
The rain quenched the country hill
As the train looped the hillocks cast
Unmindful in my journey
I hummed a song of past
The end of journey at a hill...cottages that run afar
The closing twilight that spoke avast
Unmindful through my journey
I hummed the song of past
I hummed a song of past
The beauty of lips that kissed with zeal
The sailor's heart dismast
Unmindful in my journey
I hummed a song of past
The rain quenched the country hill
As the train looped the hillocks cast
Unmindful in my journey
I hummed a song of past
The end of journey at a hill...cottages that run afar
The closing twilight that spoke avast
Unmindful through my journey
I hummed the song of past
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ReplyDeleteAwsome . Vital lines
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ReplyDeleteAwosome....impressive...touching and true feelings I guess No one can express better....compliments to u...keep up the good work....
ReplyDeleteThank u so much!
ReplyDeleteTo be very frank m not at much good in English .. but wanna appreciate ur talent .. its like awesome ..
ReplyDeleteThat the simplicity of words can evoke such beautifully interwoven emotional and scenic imagery is what I felt on reading this piece, really looking forward to reading more from you.
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ReplyDeleteAmazing lines
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ReplyDeleteBeautiful Debi Di! ❤️
ReplyDeleteThank u so much Riya😘😘
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.. Lovely.. Nostalgia
ReplyDeleteImpressive...
ReplyDeleteThank u for your encouragement ❤️
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